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IELTS Writing Task 1 Process Diagram: Template Band 7 (dengan Contoh Jawaban)

Template Band 7 untuk process diagram IELTS Academic Task 1. Kosakata urutan, struktur passive voice, contoh jawaban, dan cara menangani proses alami vs buatan manusia.

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Process diagram menguji kemampuan menyusun urutan dan passive voice. Berbeda dengan line graph atau bar chart, tidak ada angka. Tugas Anda adalah mendeskripsikan bagaimana sesuatu dibuat atau bagaimana sesuatu terjadi, secara berurutan, dengan kosakata teknis yang akurat.

Untuk tipe soal Task 1 lainnya, lihat template line graph, bar chart, pie chart, dan map.

Struktur process diagram Band 7

Empat paragraf, 170-200 kata:

  1. Introduction: parafrase prompt + sebutkan jumlah tahapan
  2. Overview: titik awal, titik akhir, total tahapan, jenis proses
  3. Body 1: paruh pertama proses secara rinci
  4. Body 2: paruh kedua proses secara rinci

Langkah 1: Kenali jenis proses

Dua jenis utama:

  • Proses alami: siklus hidup, cuaca, siklus geologi (gunakan active voice + present simple)
  • Proses buatan manusia: manufaktur, daur ulang, pengolahan air (gunakan passive voice)

Sesuaikan kata kerja Anda.

Langkah 2: Parafrase prompt + hitung tahapan

Original: "The diagram below shows the process of glass recycling."

Paraphrased: "The diagram illustrates the stages involved in recycling glass into new products, beginning with collection and ending with the production of new glass items."

Selalu hitung tahapannya sebelum menulis. Sebutkan jumlahnya di introduction atau overview: "The process consists of seven distinct stages."

Langkah 3: Tulis overview

Rangkum titik awal, titik akhir, total tahapan, dan jenis proses:

"Overall, glass recycling is a circular process that begins with the collection of used glass and ends with the manufacturing of new glass products. There are seven main stages, with crushing and melting representing the most energy-intensive steps."

Langkah 4: Paragraf isi 1, paruh pertama

Gunakan kosakata urutan dan passive voice untuk proses buatan manusia:

"At the first stage, used glass bottles and jars are collected from households and dropped off at recycling centres. The collected glass is then transported to a processing facility, where it is sorted by colour. Once sorted, the glass is washed thoroughly to remove labels, residues, and contaminants."

Langkah 5: Paragraf isi 2, paruh kedua

"Following the cleaning stage, the glass is crushed into small fragments known as cullet. The cullet is subsequently melted in a furnace at temperatures exceeding 1,500 degrees Celsius. The molten glass is then moulded into new bottles or other items, which are finally packaged and distributed to retailers, completing the recycling cycle."

Kosakata urutan

Awal:

  • at the first stage / step / phase
  • the process begins / starts with
  • initially, first, to begin with

Tengah:

  • next, then, subsequently, following this
  • after that, once [X is complete]
  • in the next / following stage

Akhir:

  • finally, lastly, in the final stage
  • at the end of the process
  • ultimately, eventually
  • the process concludes / ends with

Sebab dan akibat:

  • as a result, consequently
  • this allows, this enables
  • causing, leading to, resulting in

Pola passive voice (penting untuk Band 7)

Untuk proses buatan manusia, gunakan passive voice secara konsisten:

Active (hindari) Passive (Band 7)
"Workers collect the glass" "The glass is collected"
"They wash the bottles" "The bottles are washed"
"The factory melts it" "It is melted"

Untuk proses alami, active present simple adalah yang tepat:

  • "The water evaporates from the ocean."
  • "The seeds germinate underground."

Contoh jawaban lengkap Band 7

Prompt: Process diagram daur ulang kaca.

The diagram illustrates the stages involved in recycling glass into new products, beginning with collection from consumers and ending with the manufacture of new glass items.

Overall, glass recycling is a circular process that begins with the collection of used glass and ends with the production of new glass products. There are seven main stages, with crushing and melting representing the most energy-intensive steps.

At the first stage, used glass bottles and jars are collected from households and dropped off at recycling centres. The collected glass is then transported to a processing facility, where it is sorted by colour. Once sorted, the glass is washed thoroughly to remove labels, residues, and contaminants.

Following the cleaning stage, the glass is crushed into small fragments known as cullet. The cullet is subsequently melted in a furnace at temperatures exceeding 1,500 degrees Celsius. The molten glass is then moulded into new bottles or other items, which are finally packaged and distributed to retailers, completing the recycling cycle.

Jumlah kata: 188

Variasi proses alami

Untuk siklus hidup kupu-kupu, siklus cuaca, atau yang serupa:

The cycle begins when an adult female butterfly lays eggs on a leaf. After approximately a week, each egg hatches into a caterpillar, which feeds continuously on the leaves. Once it has reached its full size, the caterpillar attaches itself to a stem and forms a chrysalis. Inside the chrysalis, transformation occurs over two weeks, after which a fully developed butterfly emerges, completing the cycle.

Perhatikan active present simple: "lays," "hatches," "feeds."

Kesalahan umum pada process diagram

  • Mencampur active dan passive voice dalam satu esai
  • Lupa kata urutan ("then," "next," "finally")
  • Melewatkan tahapan
  • Memakai tense yang salah (proses Task 1 biasanya memakai present simple)

Untuk kesalahan Task 1 yang lebih luas, lihat 10 Kesalahan IELTS Writing Teratas yang Menghalangi Band 7.

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