Globalisation · Opinion essay · Band 7
Is Globalisation Erasing Local Cultures?
The question, a model answer written to the band 7 descriptors, why it scores that band against the 4 official criteria, topic vocabulary, and a common mistake to avoid.
Opinion essay
As international trade and travel increase, some people believe that local cultures and traditions are at risk of disappearing, replaced by a single global culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Model answer (band 7)
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I partly agree that globalisation puts pressure on local cultures, but I do not believe this inevitably leads to a single homogeneous global culture replacing distinct local traditions entirely.
The pressure is real and visible. Global brands, films, and music now reach audiences everywhere almost simultaneously, and younger generations in many countries increasingly consume the same international media, wear similar fashion, and speak English as a practical second language for international communication, sometimes at the expense of time spent engaging with local traditions, dialects, or cultural practices that previous generations maintained more consistently. In smaller or less economically powerful countries, this dynamic can feel particularly one-directional, since cultural influence tends to flow predominantly from large, wealthy markets outward rather than in both directions equally.
However, I believe the evidence for complete homogenisation is weaker than it first appears. Local cultures have consistently shown an ability to adapt and absorb outside influence while retaining distinct identity, rather than simply being replaced wholesale. Cuisine, religious practice, and regional festivals continue to thrive in most countries, often blending with global influences rather than disappearing beneath them entirely, producing genuinely new hybrid forms rather than pure loss. Furthermore, globalisation itself has made it easier for smaller cultures to reach international audiences through digital platforms, allowing local music, film, and art to find genuinely global recognition in ways that were simply impossible before widespread internet access existed.
In conclusion, while globalisation genuinely pressures local traditions and deserves active cultural protection in response, it tends to transform rather than fully erase them, producing a richer, more layered cultural landscape rather than a single, flattened, uniform one.
Why this answer scores band 7
Mapped to the 4 official IELTS Writing criteria.
- Task Response: agrees with clear qualification and explains precisely where the homogenisation argument is strong and where it overstates the real evidence.
- Coherence and Cohesion: logical movement from evidence of pressure, to evidence of cultural adaptation, to a nuanced final conclusion, clearly signposted throughout.
- Lexical Resource: precise vocabulary ('cultural homogenisation', 'hybrid form', 'cultural protection') used accurately and naturally throughout.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy: complex sentence structures, including concessive and comparative clauses, used with consistent, high accuracy.
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