IELTS エッセイの Introduction テンプレート:Band 7 の例文(減点されない書き方)

しっかりした Introduction は、エッセイ全体の印象を決めます。ただし IELTS は 2026年にテンプレート減点 を導入しました。"In contemporary society, the issue of X has become increasingly prevalent." のような暗記フレーズを試験官が見つけると、エッセイは Band 4 が上限になります。解決策はテンプレートを完全に避けることではなく、問題に合わせて変えられる 柔軟なテンプレート を使うことです。

このガイドでは、Task 2 のすべての問題タイプについて Band 7 の Introduction を紹介します。減点を招かずに応用できる基本構造も合わせて解説します。テンプレート減点の詳細は、2026 Writing changes をご覧ください。

試験官が Introduction に求めるもの

Introduction は 2〜3文で3つのこと を行います。

1. トピックを言い換える(問題文全体ではなく、トピックだけ)
2. 自分のアプローチを示す(自分の立場、またはこれから論じる内容)
3. 任意:Body パラグラフの簡単な予告

これだけです。"In modern times" や "Throughout history" で始めてはいけません。どちらもテンプレートと見なされる表現です。

問題タイプ1:意見型エッセイ(Agree / Disagree)

問題例: "Some people think that schools should focus only on academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"

Band 7 の Introduction テンプレート:

"[Topic paraphrase in your own words]. While [acknowledgment of the opposing view], [your clear position]. This essay will explain why [brief reason 1] and [brief reason 2]."

例:

"There is a growing debate about whether schools should narrow their curriculum to academic disciplines alone. While I understand the appeal of academic specialization, I firmly disagree with this view. This essay will explain why physical education and the arts are essential, and how a broad curriculum better prepares students for adult life."

語数:49語。Introduction にちょうどよい長さです。

問題タイプ2:議論型エッセイ(Discuss both views and give your opinion)

問題例: "Some people believe that university students should pay full tuition fees, while others argue that higher education should be free. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."

Band 7 の Introduction テンプレート:

"[Topic paraphrase]. While some argue that [view A], others maintain that [view B]. In this essay, I will examine both perspectives before explaining why I [your position]."

例:

"The funding of higher education divides public opinion in many countries. While some argue that students should bear the full cost of their tuition, others maintain that universities should be funded by the state. In this essay, I will examine both perspectives before explaining why I believe a hybrid model is the most equitable solution."

問題タイプ3:問題解決型エッセイ(Problem-solution)

問題例: "Many cities suffer from severe traffic congestion. What are the causes, and what measures can be taken to address this issue?"

Band 7 の Introduction テンプレート:

"[Topic paraphrase introducing the problem]. This essay will identify the main causes of [problem] and propose practical measures that [stakeholder] can take to address them."

例:

"Severe traffic congestion has become a defining feature of urban life in many major cities, with commuters facing daily delays and rising pollution levels. This essay will identify the primary causes of this issue and propose concrete measures that municipal authorities can take to alleviate it."

問題タイプ4:メリット・デメリット型エッセイ(Advantage-disadvantage)

問題例: "Some people work from home, while others prefer to commute to an office. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working from home?"

Band 7 の Introduction テンプレート:

"[Topic paraphrase noting the trend]. This essay will explore the main benefits and drawbacks of [topic], focusing on [angle 1] and [angle 2]."

例:

"Working from home has become significantly more common since the early 2020s, with many companies adopting hybrid or fully remote arrangements. This essay will explore the main benefits and drawbacks of this shift, focusing on its impact on individual productivity and on team cohesion."

問題タイプ5:2部構成の問題(Two-part questions)

問題例: "Many young people leave their hometowns to study in larger cities. Why is this trend happening? Is it a positive or negative development?"

Band 7 の Introduction テンプレート:

"[Topic paraphrase]. This essay will first explain [reason for trend], then evaluate whether the development is [positive/negative/mixed]."

例:

"An increasing number of young people are migrating from small towns to major urban centres for higher education. This essay will first explain the underlying drivers of this trend, then argue that, despite some drawbacks, the overall development is positive for both individuals and society."

避けるべき表現(テンプレート減点のきっかけになるもの)

次のフレーズは、暗記したものとして試験官にチェックされます。

• "In contemporary society / In modern times / In this day and age"
• "It is a well-known fact that"
• "From time immemorial"
• "It is widely accepted that"
• "There is no doubt that"
• "Nowadays, the issue of X has become increasingly prevalent"

これらは、問題に即した具体的な表現 に置き換えましょう。

テンプレートを安全に応用する方法

核になるスキルは、問題文の構造全体ではなく トピックを言い換える ことです。どの問題にも、類義語に置き換えられるキーワードが1〜3個あります。

• "Schools should focus only on academic subjects" → "narrow their curriculum to academic disciplines alone"
• "Traffic congestion" → "severe traffic congestion in urban areas"
• "University students should pay tuition" → "students should bear the full cost of their tuition"

試験までに20問でこの言い換えの練習をしましょう。自然にできるようになれば、Band 7 の Introduction を4分以内で書けます。

まとめ:Band 7 の全体の流れ

1. 問題文を2回読む:問題タイプを見極める
2. トピックと限定語に下線を引く
3. トピックを1文で言い換える
4. 自分の立場やアプローチを述べる
5. 任意で予告を入れる(Coherence に役立ちます)

所要時間は合計4分です。残りの36分は、Body パラグラフと結論に使います。

Body パラグラフの書き方は、10 Tips to Reach Band 7+ in Writing Task 2 と Top 10 IELTS Writing Mistakes That Block Band 7 を参照してください。採点基準については、Task 2 band descriptors をご覧ください。