IELTS Writing Task 1 doiraviy diagramma (Pie Chart): Band 7 shabloni va namunaviy javob

Doiraviy diagrammalar ulushlarni tasvirlash qobiliyatingizni sinaydi: har bir segment butunning qanday qismini tashkil qiladi. Koʻp nomzodlar segmentlarni mazmunli kategoriyalarga guruhlash oʻrniga har bir foizni alohida sanab chiqib ball yoʻqotadi. Bu shablon buni tuzatadi.

Task 1 ning boshqa savol turlari uchun chiziqli grafik, ustunli diagramma, xarita va jarayon diagrammasi shablonlariga qarang.

Band 7 doiraviy diagramma tuzilmasi

Toʻrt paragraf, 170-190 soʻz:

Introduction: savolni parafraz qilish
Overview: eng katta va eng kichik segmentlar, kategoriyalarning umumiy soni
Body 1: kattaroq segmentlarning batafsil tavsifi
Body 2: kichikroq segmentlarning batafsil tavsifi (yoki mos boʻlsa, ikki doira oʻrtasidagi taqqoslash)

1-qadam: Doiraviy diagramma turlari

Uchta keng tarqalgan format:

Bitta doiraviy diagramma: ulushlarning bitta lahzali koʻrinishi
Ikkita doiraviy diagramma: vaqt yoki guruhlar boʻyicha taqqoslash (masalan, 2000 va 2020)
Bir nechta doiraviy diagramma: uch yoki undan koʻp taqqoslash

Bir nechta doira uchun boshqacha overview kerak: faqat qaysi segment eng kattaligini emas, ulushlar doiralar oʻrtasida qanday oʻzgarganini ham qamrab olishi kerak.

2-qadam: Savolni parafraz qiling

Original: "The pie chart shows the percentage of household expenditure on different categories in the UK in 2020."

Paraphrased: "The pie chart illustrates the proportion of total spending allocated to various categories by households in the UK during 2020."

Sinonim almashtirishlar: shows → illustrates, percentage → proportion, expenditure → spending, on different categories → allocated to various categories.

3-qadam: Overview yozing

Bitta doiraviy diagramma uchun: "Overall, [largest category] accounted for the largest share of household spending, while [smallest category] received the smallest portion. The remaining categories occupied middling positions in roughly equal proportions."

Ikkita doiraviy diagramma uchun (masalan, 2000 va 2020): "Overall, the proportion of spending on [Category X] increased significantly between 2000 and 2020, while [Category Y] declined. [Category Z] remained the largest share in both years."

4-qadam: Body paragraf 1, kattaroq segmentlar

Eng yuqori 2-3 segmentni guruhlang. Ulush lugʻatidan foydalaning:

"Housing represented the largest share of household expenditure at 32%, nearly a third of total spending. Food and groceries followed closely at 28%, meaning the two combined accounted for around 60% of the average UK household budget."

5-qadam: Body paragraf 2, kichikroq segmentlar

Qolgan segmentlarni guruhlang:

"Transport and utilities each consumed roughly 12% of spending, while leisure activities took 8%. The smallest category was savings, accounting for just 5% of household expenditure, a notably low figure."

Ulush lugʻati

Katta ulushlar:

the largest / biggest / leading share
the majority of, the bulk of
nearly half, just over half, well over half
a substantial / significant / considerable proportion

Oʻrta ulushlar:

around a third / a quarter
a notable proportion
a sizeable portion

Kichik ulushlar:

a small fraction / a small percentage
the smallest / least significant share
only / just / merely [X%]
a marginal proportion

Taqqoslash iboralari:

twice as large as, three times the size of
comparable to, similar in size to
noticeably / slightly larger than

Band 7 ning toʻliq namunaviy javobi

Prompt: Buyuk Britaniyada uy xoʻjaliklari xarajatlari kategoriyalari, 2020.

The pie chart illustrates the proportion of total spending allocated to various categories by households in the UK during 2020.

Overall, housing accounted for the largest share of household expenditure, while savings received the smallest portion. The remaining categories occupied middling positions, with food and groceries clearly the second-largest expense.

Housing represented the largest share at 32%, nearly a third of total spending. Food and groceries followed closely at 28%, meaning these two categories combined accounted for around 60% of the average UK household budget.

Transport and utilities each consumed roughly 12% of spending, while leisure activities took 8%. The smallest category was savings, accounting for just 5% of household expenditure, a notably low figure that highlights the financial pressure on UK households.

Soʻzlar soni: 168

Ikkita doiraviy diagramma varianti

Agar sizda ikkita doira boʻlsa (vaqt yoki guruhlar boʻyicha taqqoslash), quyidagicha tuzing:

Body 1: Ikki doira oʻrtasida oshgan kategoriyalar
Body 2: Kamaygan yoki barqaror qolgan kategoriyalar

Doim oʻzgarish iboralarini kiriting: "rose from X% to Y%," "fell by half," "tripled in proportion," "remained at roughly the same level."

Doiraviy diagrammalardagi keng tarqalgan xatolar

Barcha foizlarni guruhlamasdan sanab chiqish
Overview ni unutish
"Proportion" yoki "percentage" oʻrniga "amount" ishlatish (doiralar umumiy miqdorni emas, ulushlarni koʻrsatadi)
Kontekstsiz foiz yozish (faqat "5%": "5% of total spending" deb yozing)

Task 1 xatolari haqida kengroq maʼlumot uchun Band 7 ga toʻsiq boʻladigan IELTS Writing dagi 10 ta eng keng tarqalgan xato maqolasiga qarang.