IELTS Writing Task 1 jarayon diagrammasi (Process Diagram): Band 7 shabloni va namunaviy javob

Jarayon diagrammalari ketma-ketlik va passive voice ni sinaydi. Chiziqli grafik yoki ustunli diagrammalardan farqli oʻlaroq, bu yerda raqamlar yoʻq: vazifangiz biror narsa qanday yasalishi yoki qanday sodir boʻlishini tartib bilan, aniq texnik lugʻat yordamida tasvirlash.

Task 1 ning boshqa savol turlari uchun chiziqli grafik, ustunli diagramma, doiraviy diagramma va xarita shablonlariga qarang.

Band 7 jarayon diagrammasi tuzilmasi

Toʻrt paragraf, 170-200 soʻz:

1. Introduction: savolni parafraz qilish va bosqichlar sonini koʻrsatish
2. Overview: boshlanish nuqtasi, tugash nuqtasi, jami bosqichlar, jarayon turi
3. Body 1: jarayonning birinchi yarmi batafsil
4. Body 2: jarayonning ikkinchi yarmi batafsil

1-qadam: Jarayon turini aniqlang

Ikki asosiy tur:

• Tabiiy jarayon: hayot sikllari, ob-havo, geologik sikllar (active voice + present simple ishlating)
• Inson yaratgan jarayon: ishlab chiqarish, qayta ishlash, suvni tozalash (passive voice ishlating)

Fellaringizni shunga moslang.

2-qadam: Savolni parafraz qiling va bosqichlarni sanang

Original: "The diagram below shows the process of glass recycling."

Paraphrased: "The diagram illustrates the stages involved in recycling glass into new products, beginning with collection and ending with the production of new glass items."

Yozishdan oldin har doim bosqichlarni sanang. Sonini introduction yoki overview da yozing: "The process consists of seven distinct stages."

3-qadam: Overview yozing

Boshlanish, tugash, jami bosqichlar va jarayon turini qamrab oling:

"Overall, glass recycling is a circular process that begins with the collection of used glass and ends with the manufacturing of new glass products. There are seven main stages, with crushing and melting representing the most energy-intensive steps."

4-qadam: 1-asosiy paragraf, birinchi yarmi

Ketma-ketlik lugʻati va inson yaratgan jarayonlar uchun passive voice dan foydalaning:

"At the first stage, used glass bottles and jars are collected from households and dropped off at recycling centres. The collected glass is then transported to a processing facility, where it is sorted by colour. Once sorted, the glass is washed thoroughly to remove labels, residues, and contaminants."

5-qadam: 2-asosiy paragraf, ikkinchi yarmi

"Following the cleaning stage, the glass is crushed into small fragments known as cullet. The cullet is subsequently melted in a furnace at temperatures exceeding 1,500 degrees Celsius. The molten glass is then moulded into new bottles or other items, which are finally packaged and distributed to retailers, completing the recycling cycle."

Ketma-ketlik lugʻati

Boshlanish:

• at the first stage / step / phase
• the process begins / starts with
• initially, first, to begin with

Oʻrta qism:

• next, then, subsequently, following this
• after that, once [X is complete]
• in the next / following stage

Tugash:

• finally, lastly, in the final stage
• at the end of the process
• ultimately, eventually
• the process concludes / ends with

Sabab va natija:

• as a result, consequently
• this allows, this enables
• causing, leading to, resulting in

Passive voice qoliplari (Band 7 uchun zarur)

Inson yaratgan jarayonlar uchun passive voice dan izchil foydalaning:

Active (qoching)	Passive (Band 7)
"Workers collect the glass"	"The glass is collected"
"They wash the bottles"	"The bottles are washed"
"The factory melts it"	"It is melted"

Tabiiy jarayonlar uchun active present simple toʻgʻri:

• "The water evaporates from the ocean."
• "The seeds germinate underground."

Toʻliq Band 7 namunaviy javob

Savol: Shisha qayta ishlash jarayoni diagrammasi.

The diagram illustrates the stages involved in recycling glass into new products, beginning with collection from consumers and ending with the manufacture of new glass items.

Overall, glass recycling is a circular process that begins with the collection of used glass and ends with the production of new glass products. There are seven main stages, with crushing and melting representing the most energy-intensive steps.

At the first stage, used glass bottles and jars are collected from households and dropped off at recycling centres. The collected glass is then transported to a processing facility, where it is sorted by colour. Once sorted, the glass is washed thoroughly to remove labels, residues, and contaminants.

Following the cleaning stage, the glass is crushed into small fragments known as cullet. The cullet is subsequently melted in a furnace at temperatures exceeding 1,500 degrees Celsius. The molten glass is then moulded into new bottles or other items, which are finally packaged and distributed to retailers, completing the recycling cycle.

Soʻzlar soni: 188

Tabiiy jarayon varianti

Kapalakning hayot sikli, ob-havo sikli yoki shunga oʻxshash narsa uchun:

The cycle begins when an adult female butterfly lays eggs on a leaf. After approximately a week, each egg hatches into a caterpillar, which feeds continuously on the leaves. Once it has reached its full size, the caterpillar attaches itself to a stem and forms a chrysalis. Inside the chrysalis, transformation occurs over two weeks, after which a fully developed butterfly emerges, completing the cycle.

Active present simple ga eʼtibor bering: "lays," "hatches," "feeds."

Jarayon diagrammalaridagi keng tarqalgan xatolar

• Bir inshoda active va passive voice ni aralashtirish
• Ketma-ketlik soʻzlarini ("then," "next," "finally") unutish
• Bosqichlarni tashlab ketish
• Notoʻgʻri zamondan foydalanish (Task 1 jarayonlari odatda present simple da)

Task 1 dagi kengroq xatolar uchun Band 7 ni toʻsadigan 10 ta IELTS Writing xatosi ga qarang.