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Cambridge IELTS 10 Test 3 Writing Task 2: Sample Answer
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Cambridge IELTS 10 Test 3 · Writing Task 2
Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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- Introduction: negative on balance
- Benefits: choice, lower prices, jobs
- Drawbacks: loss of local businesses and distinctive character
- Cultural erosion and the role of governments, with conclusion
Band 7.5 sample answer (290 words)
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It is now possible to find the same burger chains, clothing brands and smartphones in almost any major city on earth, and many commentators worry that cultures are blending into one. I believe this is, on balance, a negative development, although it brings certain benefits.
The most obvious advantage is convenience and choice. Consumers in smaller countries can access quality goods that were once unavailable, often at lower prices because global competition drives costs down. Travellers may also feel more at ease when they recognise familiar products, and international companies create jobs for local workers.
Nevertheless, I think the drawbacks are more serious. When a single multinational brand dominates a market, small local businesses frequently cannot compete and are forced to close. Traditional shops selling handmade crafts or regional food are replaced by identical stores, so a city loses much of its distinctive character. Tourism offers a telling example: visitors travel thousands of miles hoping for something unfamiliar, only to find the same shopping streets they left at home.
There is also a cultural cost that is harder to measure. Products carry values and habits with them, and younger people exposed mainly to imported fast food, fashion and entertainment may gradually lose interest in their own customs, cuisine and even language. Once such traditions fade, they are difficult to revive, and humanity loses part of its shared diversity. Admittedly, governments cannot and should not prevent people from buying what they want. Even so, they can protect heritage by supporting local producers, promoting regional festivals and teaching traditional skills in schools.
In conclusion, although global trade provides cheaper and wider choice, the growing uniformity of the high street weakens local economies and cultural identity, which in my view outweighs the convenience.
Why this answer scores Band 7.5
- Task Response: Takes a clear position (negative on balance) and acknowledges the benefits before explaining why the drawbacks outweigh them. Examples such as the tourist who finds the same shopping streets keep the argument concrete.
- Coherence and Cohesion: Logical progression from advantages to economic harm to cultural harm to possible solutions, with each paragraph focused on one idea. Cohesive devices like 'Nevertheless', 'Admittedly' and 'Even so' show a nuanced argument.
- Lexical Resource: Effective use of phrases such as 'drives costs down', 'distinctive character', 'shared diversity' and 'protect heritage'. Synonyms are used to avoid repeating 'similar' and 'products'.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy: A good range of structures, including passive forms, participle clauses, relative clauses and concessions, used accurately. Complex sentences are balanced with short, direct ones.
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