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Cambridge IELTS 13 Test 2 Writing Task 2: Sample Answer
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Cambridge IELTS 13 Test 2 · Writing Task 2
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
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- Introduction: partly agree, variety still outweighs drawbacks
- Agreeing side: overwhelming range, decision fatigue
- Benefits of choice: competition, inclusiveness, special needs
- Managing the problem: priorities, reviews, clear labelling; conclusion
Band 7.5 sample answer (309 words)
Written by IELTS 9 to the Band 7.5 descriptors, not the book's own answer and not scored by an examiner. Use it for structure and language, then write your own.
It is often claimed that modern consumers face too many choices. While I accept that an overwhelming range of options can be tiring, I believe the benefits of variety still outweigh the drawbacks, so I only partly agree with this view.
There is some truth in the argument. A shopper looking for a mobile phone, an insurance policy or even a breakfast cereal may be confronted with dozens of nearly identical products, each supported by persuasive advertising. Comparing them takes time and energy, and many people end up feeling anxious or doubtful about whether they have made the right decision. Psychologists call this decision fatigue, and it can leave individuals less satisfied with a purchase than they would have been with a simpler selection.
Nevertheless, a wide range of options brings important advantages. Competition among producers pushes prices down and quality up, which benefits ordinary families on a limited budget. Variety also allows people with specific needs, such as those with food allergies, unusual tastes or disabilities, to find products that were once unavailable to them. A generation ago, a vegetarian living in a small town might have struggled to buy a balanced meal, whereas today supermarkets stock a remarkable range of alternatives.
Moreover, the problem of excessive choice can be managed. Consumers can set clear priorities before they shop, rely on trusted reviews or simply stick to a few familiar brands. Retailers and governments can help by presenting information in a straightforward way, for example through standard labelling that makes products easy to compare. In this sense, the difficulty lies less in the number of options than in how they are presented.
In conclusion, although having too many alternatives can cause stress and confusion, I believe the freedom, affordability and inclusiveness that variety provides are more valuable, and that sensible habits and better information can limit the downsides.
Why this answer scores Band 7.5
- Task Response: The essay takes a clear, balanced position (partly agree) and supports it with concrete examples such as phones, insurance and vegetarian meals rather than vague claims.
- Coherence and Cohesion: The structure moves logically from concession to counterargument to solution, and signposting words like 'Nevertheless' and 'Moreover' make the progression easy to follow.
- Lexical Resource: Phrases such as 'decision fatigue', 'nearly identical products' and 'limited budget' show topic-specific range without sounding memorised.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Complex sentences with 'whereas', 'which' clauses and passive forms are used accurately, and punctuation is controlled throughout.
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