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Cambridge IELTS 18 Test 1 Writing Task 2: Sample Answer

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Cambridge IELTS 18 Test 1 · Writing Task 2

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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Essay plan

  1. Introduce position: largely agree, not the only aim
  2. Public funding and trust support welfare-focused science, with vaccine example
  3. Welfare focus guards against narrow commercial or military use
  4. Concede value of curiosity-driven research, then conclude

Band 7.5 sample answer (288 words)

Written by IELTS 9 to the Band 7.5 descriptors, not the book's own answer and not scored by an examiner. Use it for structure and language, then write your own.

Science serves many purposes, from satisfying human curiosity to driving industry, yet I largely agree that improving people's lives should be its central aim, although I would not call it the only worthwhile one.

The strongest argument for this view is that scientific work depends on public money and public trust. Governments and charities fund laboratories because they expect returns in health, safety and living standards. Vaccination programmes, for instance, have eradicated smallpox and brought polio close to extinction, saving millions of lives at a cost that is modest beside the benefit. When research is directed at such problems, limited resources are used where the need is greatest.

Furthermore, a focus on human welfare helps to prevent science from being captured by narrow commercial or military interests. Without this guiding principle, talented researchers may be drawn into designing addictive applications or more destructive weapons simply because these projects are generously funded. An explicit commitment to improving lives gives ethics committees and the general public a standard against which proposals can be judged.

Nevertheless, I would not want to dismiss research that has no immediate practical purpose. Many of the greatest breakthroughs came from scientists who were simply curious about how the world works. Einstein's work on relativity had no obvious application at the time, yet it later made satellite navigation possible. If funding were restricted to projects with guaranteed benefits, discoveries of this kind might never happen. Basic research therefore deserves protection, since it often becomes the foundation of tomorrow's medical and technological advances.

In conclusion, the ultimate measure of science should be its contribution to human wellbeing, but this goal is best served when curiosity-driven inquiry is supported alongside applied research rather than being sacrificed to it.

Why this answer scores Band 7.5

  • Task Response: The essay takes a clear, partial agreement stance and addresses both the aim of improving lives and the limits of that view, using the vaccine and relativity examples to support each point.
  • Coherence and Cohesion: Each paragraph has one controlling idea signalled by linkers such as 'Furthermore' and 'Nevertheless', and the conclusion restates the position without repeating sentences.
  • Lexical Resource: Collocations such as 'limited resources', 'guiding principle' and 'curiosity-driven inquiry' show precise, natural word choice with little repetition.
  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy: The essay mixes conditional sentences, participial phrases and relative clauses, with accurate punctuation and verb forms throughout.

Useful vocabulary

public trustlimited resourcesguiding principlenarrow commercial interestsimmediate practical purposegreatest breakthroughscuriosity-driven inquiryhuman wellbeing

Common mistake on this question

⚠Candidates often write only about useful inventions and ignore the word 'most important', or they flatly reject pure research without acknowledging that it later produces practical benefits.

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