Work · Discuss both views · Band 7.5
The Four-Day Working Week Debate
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Discuss both views
Some people believe companies should move to a four-day working week with no reduction in pay, while others think this would harm productivity and the economy. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Model answer (band 7.5)
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The idea of compressing a standard working week into four days without cutting pay has moved from a fringe proposal to a genuine policy discussion, with persuasive evidence cited on both sides.
Supporters point to pilot trials conducted in several countries, in which companies reduced hours while maintaining pay and reported either stable or even improved productivity, alongside substantial gains in employee wellbeing and reduced burnout. Their reasoning is that a shorter week forces organisations to eliminate genuinely unnecessary meetings and inefficient processes, meaning that much of a typical working week was already unproductive and could be compressed without any real loss of output.
Critics, however, warn that the apparent success of these trials may not generalise across every industry. Client-facing sectors such as retail and healthcare cannot simply compress their hours, since customer and patient needs exist across all five days regardless of staff schedules, meaning any reduction either requires hiring more staff, at significant added cost, or reduces service availability for the public. They also argue that the positive results from early trials may partly reflect a novelty effect, where motivated participants worked unusually hard to prove the model, and are not necessarily indicative of long-term, economy-wide outcomes once the arrangement becomes routine rather than an experiment.
In my opinion, the four-day week is promising for knowledge-based, office-centred industries, but applying it uniformly across all sectors ignores real structural differences, and policymakers should allow industries to adapt the model to their own circumstances rather than mandating a single national standard.
In conclusion, while trial results are encouraging for many industries, the four-day week should be adopted selectively rather than imposed universally across every type of work.
Why this answer scores band 7.5
Mapped to the 4 official IELTS Writing criteria.
- Task Response: both views are backed with specific reasoning (pilot trials, client-facing sector constraints) rather than general assertions, leading to a nuanced opinion.
- Coherence and Cohesion: clear view-by-view structure with a final opinion that genuinely synthesises rather than simply repeats one side.
- Lexical Resource: precise vocabulary ('novelty effect', 'client-facing sector', 'knowledge-based industry') used with genuine command of the topic.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy: sophisticated sentence construction, including passive voice and concessive clauses, sustained accurately across the essay.
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