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Cambridge IELTS 12 Test 3 · Writing Task 2
In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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- Introduction: two investment options and a stated preference
- View 1: economic and environmental case for high-speed rail
- View 2: cost, limited beneficiaries, daily commuters
- Own opinion: improve existing transport first, with a conditional exception
Band 7.5 sample answer (279 words)
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Governments facing rising demand for travel often choose between two very different investments: prestigious high-speed rail links between major cities, or modest improvements to the buses, trams and local trains that people already use. Both approaches have merit, though I favour the second.
Advocates of fast railways argue that they transform economic geography. A line that connects two cities in under two hours allows businesses to operate across both, widens the pool of jobs available to commuters and reduces domestic flights, which are far more polluting per passenger. Japan's Shinkansen, for example, has carried billions of passengers safely and has become a symbol of national efficiency. Such projects can also stimulate construction and manufacturing during the building phase, and faster journeys can bring distant regional economies closer together.
On the other hand, critics point out that these lines cost enormous sums and mostly benefit a minority of travellers, often those who are already wealthy or who travel for business. Most people spend their daily lives on local buses, suburban trains and metros, and when these are overcrowded, unreliable or expensive, the quality of ordinary life suffers directly. Investing in more frequent services, cleaner vehicles and integrated ticketing would help many more people for the same money. Cost overruns on projects such as Britain's HS2 show how easily budgets spiral.
I believe that improving existing networks should take priority, because the benefits are widely shared and visible within a few years rather than decades. Nonetheless, in large, densely populated countries where intercity routes are congested, a carefully chosen high-speed line may still be justified once local services are in good condition. Fairness to everyday passengers should guide the final decision.
Why this answer scores Band 7.5
- Task Response: Both views are discussed with specific examples (Shinkansen, HS2) and the writer's preference for existing transport is signalled early and justified at the end.
- Coherence and Cohesion: Paragraph openers such as 'Advocates of...' and 'On the other hand' make the structure easy to follow, and reference words like 'these' and 'such projects' link ideas smoothly.
- Lexical Resource: Collocations including 'economic geography', 'cost overruns', 'integrated ticketing' and 'budgets spiral' show range and precision.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy: The essay uses non-defining relative clauses, a participle phrase ('connects... allowing'-type structures), a conditional and a 'once' clause, with no noticeable errors.
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