Education · Discuss both views · Band 7

Free University vs Tuition Fees

The question, a model answer written to the band 7 descriptors, why it scores that band against the 4 official criteria, topic vocabulary, and a common mistake to avoid.

Discuss both views

Some people think university education should be free for everyone, funded entirely by the government, while others believe students should pay for their own tuition. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Model answer (band 7)

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Whether higher education should be free is a long-running debate, with strong arguments on both sides. This essay will examine each position before explaining why I favour a mixed funding model.

Supporters of free tuition argue that education is a public good, not a private luxury, and that charging fees disadvantages talented students from low-income households. Countries such as Germany and Norway, where universities charge little or nothing, show that a wholly state-funded system can produce world-class graduates while keeping access equal regardless of family wealth. Proponents also point out that an educated workforce benefits the entire economy, so it is reasonable for taxpayers collectively to fund it.

On the other hand, those who favour tuition fees argue that free universities place an unsustainable burden on public budgets, particularly as more people pursue degrees than in previous generations. They contend that students who pay fees value their education more and are less likely to drop out, and that fees allow universities to invest in better facilities and research without waiting for government budgets. In the United States, for instance, fee income lets top universities fund scholarships for students who genuinely cannot afford to pay.

In my view, neither extreme works well in practice. A system in which tuition is heavily subsidised but not entirely free, combined with means-tested grants and income-linked repayment loans, balances fairness with financial sustainability. This allows access for poorer students without placing the entire cost on taxpayers who may never benefit directly.

Ultimately, the fairest system is one that keeps education accessible while sharing its cost between the state, the individual, and their future earnings.

Why this answer scores band 7

Mapped to the 4 official IELTS Writing criteria.

  • Task Response: both views are given genuinely balanced treatment with specific examples (Germany/Norway vs the US) before a clear personal opinion is reached.
  • Coherence and Cohesion: a textbook discuss-both-views structure (view 1, view 2, opinion) with clear paragraph topics and linking phrases ('On the other hand').
  • Lexical Resource: topic-specific vocabulary like 'means-tested grants', 'income-linked repayment' and 'public good' shows wide range beyond generic terms.
  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy: accurate use of comparative and concessive structures; one or two minor article slips would be typical at this band.

Useful vocabulary & collocations

Phrases used in the model answer that lift Lexical Resource naturally.

public goodmeans-tested grantincome-linked repaymenttuition feestate-funded systemunsustainable burdenequal accessfinancial sustainability

Common mistake on this type of question

⚠A common error in discuss-both-views essays is forgetting to state your own opinion, or only hinting at it. Examiners specifically check for an explicit personal position, usually in the conclusion.

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