Health · Opinion essay · Band 7

Should Sugary Drinks Be Taxed?

The question, a model answer written to the band 7 descriptors, why it scores that band against the 4 official criteria, topic vocabulary, and a common mistake to avoid.

Opinion essay

Some people believe that governments should impose taxes on sugary drinks and unhealthy foods to reduce obesity, while others think this unfairly interferes with personal freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree with taxing unhealthy products? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Model answer (band 7)

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I agree that taxing sugary drinks and similarly unhealthy products is a reasonable public health measure, even though I understand the concern that it limits personal choice.

The strongest argument for such taxes is their demonstrated effect on consumption. Several countries that have introduced sugar taxes have recorded measurable drops in sales of sugary drinks, with some manufacturers reformulating recipes to reduce sugar content specifically to avoid the tax bracket. This shows that price genuinely influences behaviour at a population level, even for individuals who claim they would never change their habits in response to cost. Given that obesity-related illnesses impose enormous costs on public healthcare systems, a modest tax that nudges consumption downward seems a proportionate response to a problem that affects far more than just the individual making the purchase.

The personal freedom objection, while understandable, is not as strong as it first appears. Nobody is prevented from buying a sugary drink; the tax simply reflects, through price, some of the wider social cost that excessive consumption imposes on others, through higher insurance premiums and strained public hospitals. Similar reasoning already underlies taxes on tobacco and alcohol, which are broadly accepted despite being, in principle, personal choices too.

That said, such taxes should be paired with genuine support for people on low incomes, for whom even small price increases can be disproportionately burdensome, otherwise the policy risks penalising poverty rather than genuinely improving health outcomes.

In conclusion, taxing unhealthy products is a justified and effective public health tool, provided it is designed carefully to avoid placing unfair weight on those least able to absorb the cost.

Why this answer scores band 7

Mapped to the 4 official IELTS Writing criteria.

  • Task Response: takes a clear position while directly engaging with and responding to the counter-argument, showing balanced critical thinking.
  • Coherence and Cohesion: logical flow from evidence, to rebuttal of the opposing view, to a caveat, each introduced with clear cohesive signposting.
  • Lexical Resource: precise policy vocabulary ('sugar tax', 'price elasticity' implied through 'nudges consumption', 'disproportionately burdensome') used accurately.
  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy: complex conditional and concessive structures are handled accurately, with good control of subordination.

Useful vocabulary & collocations

Phrases used in the model answer that lift Lexical Resource naturally.

sugar taxpublic healthcare systemproportionate responsesocial costinsurance premiumlow-income householdreformulate recipepublic health measure

Common mistake on this type of question

⚠Candidates often ignore the personal-freedom counter-argument entirely. Engaging with and then responding to the opposing view, rather than pretending it doesn't exist, is what examiners mean by a 'well-developed' position.

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