Society · Discuss both views · Band 7.5

Is an Ageing Population a Problem?

The question, a model answer written to the band 7.5 descriptors, why it scores that band against the 4 official criteria, topic vocabulary, and a common mistake to avoid.

Discuss both views

Some people believe that an ageing population is a serious problem for society, while others argue that it simply reflects a successful, healthy society and should not be viewed negatively. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Model answer (band 7.5)

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An ageing population, where the proportion of elderly citizens grows relative to younger generations, is often framed as a looming crisis, though some argue this framing misses the achievement it actually represents.

Those who view it as a serious problem point to clear economic pressures. A shrinking working-age population must support a growing number of retirees through pensions and healthcare spending, straining public budgets in ways that eventually require either higher taxes, reduced benefits, or both. Countries such as Japan illustrate this challenge concretely, with labour shortages already affecting multiple sectors as the workforce contracts while healthcare demand rises simultaneously.

Others argue that an ageing population is, at its core, a sign of success rather than failure. Longer life expectancy reflects improved healthcare, nutrition, and living standards, genuine achievements that earlier generations could only aspire to, and framing this positive outcome as a crisis risks treating elderly citizens as a burden rather than as people who have earned continued support after contributing throughout their working lives. They also note that many older people remain active contributors to society, through continued part-time work, caregiving for grandchildren, or volunteering, roles that standard economic statistics often fail to capture or value properly.

In my opinion, both framings contain truth: the demographic shift creates genuine fiscal challenges that cannot be wished away, but the solution lies in adapting economic and social systems, through measures such as flexible retirement and immigration policy, rather than treating longevity itself as the problem to be solved.

In conclusion, an ageing population is best understood as a success that requires serious practical adaptation, not as a crisis to be reversed or resented.

Why this answer scores band 7.5

Mapped to the 4 official IELTS Writing criteria.

  • Task Response: both views are developed with specific detail (Japan's labour shortages, caregiving contributions) before a balanced, reasoned opinion is reached.
  • Coherence and Cohesion: clear view-by-view organisation with a synthesising opinion paragraph that integrates rather than restates the two positions.
  • Lexical Resource: precise demographic vocabulary ('working-age population', 'fiscal challenge', 'demographic shift') used accurately throughout.
  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy: accurate, varied complex sentences, including non-finite clauses, sustained across a long essay with minimal error.

Useful vocabulary & collocations

Phrases used in the model answer that lift Lexical Resource naturally.

ageing populationworking-age populationlife expectancyfiscal challengelabour shortagedemographic shiftflexible retirementeconomic statistics

Common mistake on this type of question

⚠Candidates sometimes pick the 'kinder-sounding' view (success, not crisis) without acknowledging the real fiscal argument on the other side. Genuine engagement with the less comfortable argument strengthens Task Response.

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