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CCTV Surveillance: Pros and Cons

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Advantages and disadvantages

Many governments and cities have installed large numbers of CCTV cameras in public places to monitor crime and public safety. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this widespread use of surveillance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Model answer (band 7)

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The widespread installation of CCTV cameras in public spaces has become standard practice in many cities, offering genuine safety benefits while raising legitimate concerns about privacy and the concentration of surveillance power.

The clearest advantage is deterrence and evidence gathering. Visible cameras discourage certain opportunistic crimes, since potential offenders know their actions are likely to be recorded, and footage has repeatedly proven valuable in identifying and prosecuting suspects after incidents occur, helping resolve cases that would otherwise rely entirely on unreliable eyewitness testimony. Cities with extensive camera networks, such as London, frequently cite faster case resolution rates as a direct result of readily available footage.

However, the disadvantages are substantial. Mass surveillance fundamentally alters the relationship between citizens and the state, normalising constant monitoring of ordinary public behaviour that was previously private in any meaningful sense, even if no wrongdoing is involved. There are also serious concerns about how this data is stored, who can access it, and whether it could be misused by governments for purposes well beyond crime prevention, such as monitoring political dissent or protest activity. Additionally, evidence on CCTV's actual deterrent effect is more mixed than commonly assumed, since cameras tend to displace certain crimes to nearby unmonitored areas rather than genuinely reducing the overall level of crime across a city.

On balance, I believe targeted surveillance in high-risk areas, combined with strict, independently audited rules on data access and retention, offers a reasonable compromise between public safety and personal privacy.

In conclusion, CCTV surveillance delivers genuine safety benefits, but only remains justifiable when paired with meaningful, enforceable limits on how the resulting data can be used.

Why this answer scores band 7

Mapped to the 4 official IELTS Writing criteria.

  • Task Response: advantages and disadvantages are both developed with specific mechanisms (displacement effect, data misuse) rather than surface-level claims.
  • Coherence and Cohesion: clear benefit-then-cost paragraphing with an 'on balance' section that genuinely weighs rather than restates the two sides.
  • Lexical Resource: precise vocabulary ('deterrent effect', 'displacement', 'data retention') demonstrating accurate command of the topic.
  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy: a wide range of complex structures, including passive voice and concessive clauses, used with high accuracy.

Useful vocabulary & collocations

Phrases used in the model answer that lift Lexical Resource naturally.

mass surveillancedeterrent effectdisplacement effectdata retentionpolitical dissentcase resolution rateeyewitness testimonyindependently audited

Common mistake on this type of question

⚠Essays on surveillance often treat it as purely good or purely sinister. The strongest responses acknowledge the genuine trade-off between public safety and individual privacy rather than dismissing one side.

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