Government · Opinion essay · Band 7
Should Voting Be Compulsory?
The question, a model answer written to the band 7 descriptors, why it scores that band against the 4 official criteria, topic vocabulary, and a common mistake to avoid.
Opinion essay
Some people believe that voting in national elections should be made compulsory for all citizens, while others think voting should remain a personal choice. To what extent do you agree that voting should be made compulsory? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Model answer (band 7)
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I disagree that voting should be made compulsory, even though I recognise the genuine problems that low voter turnout creates for the legitimacy of democratic governments.
Supporters of compulsory voting argue that low turnout distorts election outcomes, since results then reflect only the preferences of the most motivated citizens rather than the population as a whole, and that countries such as Australia, which enforces compulsory voting, consistently achieve turnout above ninety percent, producing governments with a clearer democratic mandate. They also argue that voting is a civic duty comparable to paying taxes or serving on a jury, which society reasonably compels because the collective benefit outweighs individual inconvenience.
However, I believe forcing people to vote undermines the very principle that elections are meant to express: genuine, freely given consent. A citizen who is forced to cast a ballot despite having no informed preference, or who deliberately spoils it in protest, adds noise rather than meaningful signal to the result, and this is precisely the pattern observed in several countries with compulsory voting, where informal or blank votes rise substantially. Rather than compelling participation, I believe governments should focus on removing the practical barriers that actually suppress turnout, such as inconvenient polling hours, inaccessible registration processes, or limited availability of early and postal voting, all of which disproportionately affect lower-income and working citizens who find election-day attendance genuinely difficult to arrange around existing commitments.
In conclusion, while low turnout is a legitimate and serious concern, compulsion addresses only the symptom rather than the underlying cause, and removing practical barriers to voting would raise genuine participation more meaningfully than legal compulsion ever realistically could.
Why this answer scores band 7
Mapped to the 4 official IELTS Writing criteria.
- Task Response: disagrees clearly while genuinely engaging with the strongest counter-argument (Australia's turnout data) before rebutting it directly.
- Coherence and Cohesion: a clear for-then-against structure with an explicit alternative proposal, all logically connected through cohesive transitions.
- Lexical Resource: precise civic vocabulary ('democratic mandate', 'informal vote', 'civic duty') used accurately and appropriately for the topic.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy: complex sentence structures, including relative and conditional clauses, are used with consistent accuracy throughout.
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