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Cambridge IELTS 11 Test 1 Writing Task 2: Sample Answer
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Cambridge IELTS 11 Test 1 · Writing Task 2
Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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- Introduce position: largely agree rail should be prioritised
- Congestion and emissions benefits of rail
- Social equality and regional economic growth
- Concession: roads still needed, then conclusion
Band 7.5 sample answer (284 words)
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Although roads remain indispensable, I largely agree that public money would be better invested in railways, because rail offers wider long-term benefits to society and the environment.
The strongest argument concerns congestion and pollution. A single commuter train can carry as many passengers as several hundred cars, so every new line removes a significant volume of traffic from city centres. Rail is also easier to electrify, which means far lower emissions per passenger and a realistic contribution towards national climate targets. Building more motorways, by contrast, often generates additional traffic and merely postpones the next jam. The money saved on constant road widening could instead be spent on modern trains, stations and signalling systems.
Railways also promote fairness and regional growth. People who cannot drive, such as the elderly, students and low-income families, depend on affordable public transport to reach jobs, universities and hospitals. Moreover, a fast connection can draw investment to towns that were previously isolated, as Japan's high-speed network has demonstrated over several decades.
Nevertheless, it would be unrealistic to neglect roads altogether. Buses, ambulances and delivery lorries all depend on them, and in sparsely populated areas, where a railway would serve very few passengers, a well-maintained road is the only practical option. A government that ignored road repairs would soon face higher accident rates and rising costs for businesses. Rail depends on roads too, since most passengers still need a bus or a taxi to reach the station.
In conclusion, governments should continue to fund essential road maintenance, but when it comes to major new projects, they should give priority to rail. This approach would ease urban traffic, protect the environment and give every citizen a more reliable way to travel.
Why this answer scores Band 7.5
- Task Response: The essay takes a clear position of qualified agreement and supports it with reasons, an example from Japan and a fair concession about rural roads.
- Coherence and Cohesion: Each paragraph has one central idea, and linkers such as 'by contrast', 'moreover' and 'nevertheless' guide the reader without sounding mechanical.
- Lexical Resource: Precise phrases like 'generates additional traffic', 'electrify' and 'regional growth' show topic-specific range with little repetition.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy: The writing mixes relative clauses, a conditional, participial structures and contrast sentences with consistent accuracy.
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